This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 56; the fifty-sixth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write.
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| Photo courtesy: Ranaji Deb (https://www.facebook.com/ranajideb/photos) |
Paper boats
Blinking back tears, the pages of her diary
were soon filled with her heart’s voice.
It was diary he gifted on the day she left.
As she closed her eyes for the journey away,
she made sure,
that every rainy day
a paper boat floated away
with a secret message.
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This is a 55 Fiction post which is basically a fictional story in 55 word or less (including the title). My post includes 52 words, inclusive of the title. Do help me with your comments - bouquets or brickbats - in the comments section below.
I hope her message finds him somehow. :)
ReplyDeleteI hope so too! :)
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Short, sweet and makes it point :)
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DeleteThank you for taking out time to read and comment on my post.
Short, sweet and makes it point :)
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Hi Gauri -So u are now a published author. Congratulations.
ReplyDeleteLet me know- how I can lay my hands on a copy of your book?
This paper boat - reminds me of Jagjit Singh's Woh kaagaz ki Kashti-...Well written. All the best for BAT
Hi Viyoma!
DeleteThank you dear! :) The book called 6 Degrees will be available soon in book stores, and I'll let you know when it does.
Now that you mentioned it, it does seem apt for this song, right?
All the best to you too!
There was this pleasant "Ah!" that I said, when I finished reading your lines. The last lines are beautiful to read and visually imagine.
DeleteThank you Salvi! Much appreciated.
Deleteshort, sweet and beautiful, loved it
ReplyDeleteMy BAT56 entry A Secret Revealed
Thank you Cifar!
DeleteSimple but strong in approach. Nicely written but the secrets yet to be revealed...:(
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking out time to visit my blog and comment. Yes, the secrets will be revealed, but all in good time! :)
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ReplyDeleteCrisp and emotive... Some things are missed only when you part with them..
ReplyDeleteThank you Megha, for visiting my blog and taking time to post a comment.
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