I sense my senses
experience the magic;
A twinkle in the warm sunshine
when my fingertips brush the leaf tip
A glisten of the morning dew
when I hear the pitter patter of rain
A flutter in the autumn breeze
when my long hair falls on my face
An aroma of sweet smells
when I caress a rosebud
I shiver in the winter cold
feeling goosebumps on my skin
I pray a solemn prayer in His abode
To those who have the power of sight
May their life be as magical
as I 'see' it without light
(c) Gkam
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nicely composed!!
ReplyDeletewell if you are blind how do you feel the twinkle of the sunshine and the glisten of the morning dew?hehe..jus for fun..but i like ur poem..has a good feel..
ReplyDeleteYou should write more of such beautiful pieces! The 'invisibly-visible' thought is what strikes most here! Short is really cute! :)
ReplyDeletesoft and beautiful...
ReplyDeletevery cute and beautiful gkam.
ReplyDeleteI wish you all the best for the contest, SSC - II
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@bhavana, leo welcome to Pondering Perceptions
ReplyDeleteand @all, thank you very much!
@leo
basic idea behind the poem is that although she is visually impaired, she perceives better with other senses than what we perceive with vision.
Oh wow this is very beautiful!
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wish I could be able to choose to be blind temporarily just to 'see' what the world would seem like...
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Thoughtful and nice.
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Such a wonderful thought.. Nice work.. ATB .. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome dear! Each and every word is so meaningful... loved the poem! :) My vote goes to you...
ReplyDeletesimple and so nice!!
ReplyDeleteaptly linked to pic!
This one is the best i have read so. Thankfully I dont feel sad after reading this! Kudos different theme from the others i've read so far
ReplyDeleteVery well written! It is a reminder to people to express gratitude towards many a blessings in life that are often taken for granted.ATB with SSC2 :)
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful ! But I loved the last line , it shoots us with so many thoughts ! :) Needless to say on eof the most inspiring poem of thsoe I have read from SSC-II
ReplyDeletelovely...!!!!
ReplyDeletewritten with a nice flow..
@bedlam, afshan, venky, raksha, adreamygal, purnima
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@punit thanks a ton for ur vote! :)
A warm welcome to my blog!
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ReplyDeleteThanks, its a bit incoherent for me to translate from chinese to english. If you may pls post in english. thanku and keep reading!
Lovely piece gkam, very eloquent and very apt for the picture/theme.
ReplyDeleteGood luck for the contest!
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'ʎɐʍ ǝɥʇ ʎq
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¡ƃuıʇǝǝɹƃ ɯɹɐʍ ¡puǝıɹɟ ʎɯ oןןǝɥ
simply awesome lines....truly heart-touching...
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Simply Clever, Every lines define the beauty of the poem.
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